Topic: poem I wrote
Anonymous A started this discussion 15 years ago #9,529
Hey I'm 15, my name is Jack. I just started writing poems.
I am naturally obscene
the product of capitalism and cream
I am a teenage waste and a revolution
Fuck god, I believe in evolution
we'd be better off in a communist instutitition
I believe in abortion
I believe that we are being taught a distortion
edecutation
masturbation
frustration
I am the only who matters in this nation
Cut me from the seam
I am a teenage dream
I am a laser beam
shine through like the sun
I wish I had a gun
I am naturally obscene
the product of capitalism and cream
I am a teenage waste and a revolution
Fuck god, I believe in evolution
we'd be better off in a communist instutitition
I believe in abortion
I believe that we are being taught a distortion
edecutation
masturbation
frustration
I am the only who matters in this nation
Cut me from the seam
I am a teenage dream
I am a laser beam
shine through like the sun
I wish I had a gun
Tekamine !AnRbswGQv. joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 24 minutes later[^] [v] #169,312
I can actually hear iambic pentameter in your poem lol.
Fake anon !ZkUt8arUCU joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 7 minutes later, 31 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #169,320
I know how you feel @OP, I used to like linkin park too.
Anonymous D joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 25 minutes later, 57 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #169,358
!ocurburUbk joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 10 minutes later, 1 hour after the original post[^] [v] #169,374
Receive a cat for your generous efforts.