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Topic: why is most poetry retarded

Sheila LaBoof started this discussion 6 years ago #87,418

like, fuck off with that verse shit

Anonymous B joined in and replied with this 6 years ago, 47 minutes later[^] [v] #1,000,568

It would be snappier if you said that in rhyming couplets.

Anonymous C joined in and replied with this 6 years ago, 39 minutes later, 1 hour after the original post[^] [v] #1,000,580

imagine —
you are the last of your species,

an angel, who dances on
ice.

like
a
film that protects
this earth ,
your wings are broken ,
and these are the pieces of you that cannot go
home .
.

so on
tiptoes, this cracked marble
does not shatter,
and
everyone gets to watch you perform ,
unknowing of the cold truth that you are shackled
to ,

like
a ballerina in a box
that hums a sweet tune —

you still dance ,
even as the last of your species,
even though
you are all that you have left.

and
even though
you have decided that love is a form of
betrayal.
.

Sheila LaBoof (OP) replied with this 6 years ago, 29 minutes later, 1 hour after the original post[^] [v] #1,000,586

one fish
two fish

Father Merrin !u5oFWxmY7U joined in and replied with this 6 years ago, 23 minutes later, 2 hours after the original post[^] [v] #1,000,591

Very often in the evenings I read the poetry of Catullus and Propertius, sometimes aloud, for my own pleasure. I like to hear that glorious Latin ring off the frescoed walls of my church.

Mosquito Valentine⚡ joined in and replied with this 6 years ago, 1 hour later, 3 hours after the original post[^] [v] #1,000,607

maybe you're just reading Bad poetry
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