Topic: So I went to that Italian restaurant across the street before the show tonight

YeastPaste™ !iAYoMftFR2 started this discussion 8 years ago #75,472

I was really enjoying my angel’s hair pasta, until I found out the busboy’s name is Angel!

*rimjob*

Anonymous B joined in and replied with this 8 years ago, 3 hours later[^] [v] #890,012

This is killer shit!

Anonymous C joined in and replied with this 8 years ago, 3 hours later, 6 hours after the original post[^] [v] #890,024

@OP

You're telling jokes all wrong. The joke should be in the present tense, and it should avoid any details that are not absolutely necessary for the punchline.

Here is the correct way to tell the "joke" you wrote:

When I go to an Italian restaurant, I get angel hair pasta. I check my plate carefully, because there are lots of dumb busboys named Angel.

Now THAT is killer shit.

(Edited 27 seconds later.)

beckyderp !Memes4aSuc joined in and replied with this 8 years ago, 2 hours later, 8 hours after the original post[^] [v] #890,035

@previous (C)
That's not funny either though

dw joined in and replied with this 8 years ago, 1 hour later, 9 hours after the original post[^] [v] #890,041

@890,024 (C)
If matts joke was like 3/10 yours was like 1.5/10

Fake anon !ZkUt8arUCU joined in and replied with this 8 years ago, 1 hour later, 10 hours after the original post[^] [v] #890,049

@890,024 (C)
Thanks for the masterclass on how to take something that isn't funny and make it worse.

Minichan