Topic: I have to piss (a light poem)
brie !kGoudaMCFA started this discussion 9 years ago #60,046
I have to piss
I have to piss
when I go it will be bliss
my bladder's yearning for release
my peeing dance will not cease
I'm rocking back and forth on heels
I'm taking bets for when the peal
of raccous laughter will begin
I've gone and pissed my pants again
hot toddy joined in and replied with this 9 years ago, 39 seconds later[^] [v] #762,513
don't like it
brie !kGoudaMCFA (OP) replied with this 9 years ago, 1 minute later, 1 minute after the original post[^] [v] #762,516
@previous (hot toddy)
it's not my best, but i really do have to piss
Anonymous C joined in and replied with this 9 years ago, 7 minutes later, 8 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #762,517
@762,513 (hot toddy)
> don't like it kook !!OPZbEQMT1 joined in and replied with this 9 years ago, 4 minutes later, 13 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #762,518
I like it
brie !kGoudaMCFA (OP) replied with this 9 years ago, 3 minutes later, 16 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #762,519
@previous (kook !!OPZbEQMT1)
Thanks kook
kook !!OPZbEQMT1 replied with this 9 years ago, 2 minutes later, 19 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #762,521
@previous (brie !kGoudaMCFA)
No problem, sweets.
The Witch Doctor !6W1Zpe4MCM joined in and replied with this 9 years ago, 11 minutes later, 31 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #762,525

I rather like it.
chili dog !!81dzJNNYL joined in and replied with this 9 years ago, 8 minutes later, 39 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #762,533
> my peeing dance will not cease
should be
> my peeing dance it will not cease
to match the meter
also it's spelled raucous
that is all
brie !kGoudaMCFA (OP) replied with this 9 years ago, 3 minutes later, 42 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #762,536
@previous (chili dog !!81dzJNNYL)
thank you
Sheila LaBoof joined in and replied with this 9 years ago, 43 minutes later, 1 hour after the original post[^] [v] #762,545
arraragghh piss everywhere
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