Topic: Untitled Poem 2
brie !kGoudaMCFA started this discussion 9 years ago #59,522
Put it on a crystal that I could feel it better
Then enflamed a pistil and sunk it in the header
A thousand rotations and I'm doing the same
Ablation marked a dark time what else could be to blame
Creation of another work to simply pass the hours
Still would never take him on if he had those powers
Laugh directly in the face of righteous indignation
Surely it is a disgrace I'm pleased with my stagnation
Chance it all again in denial of the stakes
Drifting now across the lanes and slamming on the brakes
What seemed like a fantastic plea in the early light
Has doomed me in the evening shade to finally face my plight
Then enflamed a pistil and sunk it in the header
A thousand rotations and I'm doing the same
Ablation marked a dark time what else could be to blame
Creation of another work to simply pass the hours
Still would never take him on if he had those powers
Laugh directly in the face of righteous indignation
Surely it is a disgrace I'm pleased with my stagnation
Chance it all again in denial of the stakes
Drifting now across the lanes and slamming on the brakes
What seemed like a fantastic plea in the early light
Has doomed me in the evening shade to finally face my plight
The Doctor !7MHPahvoGY joined in and replied with this 9 years ago, 6 minutes later[^] [v] #757,325
brie !kGoudaMCFA (OP) replied with this 9 years ago, 14 minutes later, 21 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #757,326
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brie !kGoudaMCFA (OP) replied with this 9 years ago, 3 minutes later, 38 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #757,335
Sheila LaBoof joined in and replied with this 9 years ago, 3 minutes later, 41 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #757,336
@OP
> Put it on a crystal that I could feel it better
> Then enflamed a pistil and sunk it in the header
>
> A thousand rotations and I'm doing the same
> Ablation marked a dark time what else could be to blame
>
> Creation of another work to simply pass the hours
> Still would never take him on if he had those powers
>
> Laugh directly in the face of righteous indignation
> Surely it is a disgrace I'm pleased with my stagnation
>
> Chance it all again in denial of the stakes
> Drifting now across the lanes and slamming on the brakes
>
> What seemed like a fantastic plea in the early light
> Has doomed me in the evening shade to finally face my plight
WHile I read your poem, I made up another pome
Vroom vroom vroom, I'm driving a motorbike
Wheeeee!
> Put it on a crystal that I could feel it better
> Then enflamed a pistil and sunk it in the header
>
> A thousand rotations and I'm doing the same
> Ablation marked a dark time what else could be to blame
>
> Creation of another work to simply pass the hours
> Still would never take him on if he had those powers
>
> Laugh directly in the face of righteous indignation
> Surely it is a disgrace I'm pleased with my stagnation
>
> Chance it all again in denial of the stakes
> Drifting now across the lanes and slamming on the brakes
>
> What seemed like a fantastic plea in the early light
> Has doomed me in the evening shade to finally face my plight
WHile I read your poem, I made up another pome
Vroom vroom vroom, I'm driving a motorbike
Wheeeee!
brie !kGoudaMCFA (OP) replied with this 9 years ago, 9 minutes later, 51 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #757,339
FuckAlms !vX8K53rFBI joined in and replied with this 9 years ago, 28 minutes later, 1 hour after the original post[^] [v] #757,345
Not bad.