Topic: The Fresh Prince of Cornwall draft one.
Green !BEERiVqJJw started this discussion 10 years ago #49,040
In the west of the Cornwall born and raised,
in the library is where I spent most of my days,
chilling out, painting Warhammer all cool,
then playing some Halo outside of the school,
when a couple of UKIPS, who were up to no good,
started making fun of my friend Mahmood,
I got in one online fight and the servers stalled,
I cursed the shitty internet we have in Cornwall.
I looked for a pasty and when it came near,
it tasted bland and it had dice in the mirror,
if anything I could say that this made me full,
but I thought, no forget it,
Onward to Cornwall!
in the library is where I spent most of my days,
chilling out, painting Warhammer all cool,
then playing some Halo outside of the school,
when a couple of UKIPS, who were up to no good,
started making fun of my friend Mahmood,
I got in one online fight and the servers stalled,
I cursed the shitty internet we have in Cornwall.
I looked for a pasty and when it came near,
it tasted bland and it had dice in the mirror,
if anything I could say that this made me full,
but I thought, no forget it,
Onward to Cornwall!
Anonymous B joined in and replied with this 10 years ago, 6 minutes later[^] [v] #638,834
It stalls at the end, but it is definitely promising up until that point. Needs a little tweaking, but over-all good effort.
RWBY Rhubarb? !!iNo3FkiZx joined in and replied with this 10 years ago, 53 minutes later, 59 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #638,839
i love it!Anonymous D joined in and replied with this 10 years ago, 5 minutes later, 1 hour after the original post[^] [v] #638,845
Gelwel orth an kreslu!