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Topic: I wrote another short scene or excerpt of a story.

Catherine !TGirlYJKXM started this discussion 12 years ago #34,578

I am such a terrible writer.

The Travelling Knight
http://pastebin.com/wycctuVw

Anonymous B joined in and replied with this 12 years ago, 3 hours later[^] [v] #476,908

> I am such a terrible writer.
Great way to start this thread. It encourages me to read your story and puts me in a good frame of mind for doing so.

Anonymous C joined in and replied with this 12 years ago, 30 minutes later, 3 hours after the original post[^] [v] #476,914

> I am such a terrible writer.

Protip: Even if you think what you wrote is shit... Don't invite your readers to confirm that suspicion.

George R. R. Martin's series of fantasy novels: "I think I write overly violent and pointlessly stupid scenes that drag on too long with annoying, drawn-out dialogue and imaginary scenes maybe about people getting murdered and possibly tits" didn't get picked up by HBO. His other series about dragons and women with tits made it big.

Show some fucking confidence...

Catherine !TGirlYJKXM (OP) replied with this 12 years ago, 30 minutes later, 4 hours after the original post[^] [v] #476,921

@previous (C)
> Sunset found her squatting in the grass, groaning. Every stool was looser than the one before, and smelled fouler. By the time the moon came up she was shitting brown water. The more she drank, the more she shat, but the more she shat, the thirstier she grew, and her thirst sent her crawling to the stream to suck up more water. When she closed her eyes at last, Dany did not know whether she would be strong enough to open them again.

Always makes me laugh if this really is from his book.
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