COMMENTS ON YOUR ESSAY: YOUR ESSAY SHOWED BASIC ORGANIZATIONAL STRUCTURE, BUT THE IDEAS NEED TO BE MORE CLEARLY CONNECTED. USING MORE VARIED SENTENCE STRUCTURES WOULD MAKE YOUR ESSAY CLEARER AND MORE ENGAGING.
Stealth joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 7 minutes later, 13 minutes after the original post[^][v]#309,710
@previous (HaikerensGuide !0VegJ9Jl.Q)
Work on the reading - My English skills suck but Math/Science rock. Lots of money to be made with Math/Science and only a tiny small number of people make money with writing skills.
I do pay $ for editors to clean up my submissions for work product! So yes it cuts my profit and well worth it.
Ks !KansasxqvM joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 12 minutes later, 26 minutes after the original post[^][v]#309,717
Anything below a 90 would get you sent to study my house, boy. >;/
What grade are you in now, Wally?
Fake anon !ZkUt8arUCU joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 6 minutes later, 32 minutes after the original post[^][v]#309,719
Have you taken the SAT/PSAT as well?
Anonymous G joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 12 minutes later, 45 minutes after the original post[^][v]#309,723
Memorize Glug, no it's not and write that for your essay next time.
HaikerensGuide !0VegJ9Jl.Q (OP) replied with this 14 years ago, 6 minutes later, 51 minutes after the original post[^][v]#309,724
@309,710 (Stealth)
Yeah, but the bad part is that my bad speedwriting skills may keep me from going to a good school :( @309,717 (Ks !KansasxqvM)
11th grade, with one more year (that is, if I don't just get a GED and go straight to college) @309,719 (Fake anon !ZkUt8arUCU)
We don't do the SAT here. @previous (G)
Fuck you. Now I have Vernors all over my screen.
Anonymous G replied with this 14 years ago, 8 minutes later, 59 minutes after the original post[^][v]#309,730
@previous (HaikerensGuide !0VegJ9Jl.Q)
Nazi Kingdom Hearts then.
Falco !PZmcClOUDk joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 15 minutes later, 1 hour after the original post[^][v]#309,738
Broseph !!fxnDb+Ve4 joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 21 minutes later, 1 hour after the original post[^][v]#309,746
We could tell from his posts here that his ideas aren't very well connected, and it's obvious he doesn't give a shit about art or literature, but his other scores are impressive. He's clearly in in 80+ percentile. He's a smart guy.
Broseph !!fxnDb+Ve4 double-posted this 14 years ago, 5 minutes later, 1 hour after the original post[^][v]#309,747
@309,724 (HaikerensGuide !0VegJ9Jl.Q)
You go to a public school, right? That's mainly to blame for your poor writing skills. I've heard many college professors say that they're disgusted with the English skills of most freshman. I was lucky, and my senior year I got an English teacher who was well aware of the problem, and spent the year bashing proper writing skills into our skulls. I worked with him one-on-one to improve my writing skills, and I might not have been accepted to the school of my choice if not for his help.
Tl;dr- get a writing tutor to help you with your skills and you'll be good all around. You'll have no problem getting into college.
HaikerensGuide !0VegJ9Jl.Q (OP) replied with this 14 years ago, 8 minutes later, 1 hour after the original post[^][v]#309,755
@309,730 (G)
Oh God. I almost forgot about that one. @309,738 (Falco !PZmcClOUDk)
Another quality postâ„¢ brought to you by Falco. @previous (Broseph !!fxnDb+Ve4) > it's obvious he doesn't give a shit about art or literature
That is mostly true, but I am fascinated with Old English and Old Norse epic poems. @previous (Broseph !!fxnDb+Ve4) > You go to a public school, right?
Yeah, but it's pretty damn good. It's not flawless at all and the administrations have done some stuff that have really pissed me off, but that doesn't mean it's shitty. > That's mainly to blame for your poor writing skills.
You sure that it isn't also that I am just more into math/science things? > Tl;dr- get a writing tutor to help you with your skills and you'll be good all around. You'll have no problem getting into college.
Alright. I suppose I could do well to get a tutor. Thank you.
Anonymous B replied with this 14 years ago, 9 minutes later, 2 hours after the original post[^][v]#309,767
@309,747 (Broseph !!fxnDb+Ve4)
this is your writing with tutoring?
advi !!3gpAcg/hF joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 3 minutes later, 2 hours after the original post[^][v]#309,771
@309,746 (Broseph !!fxnDb+Ve4)
I got a 21 composite score on my ACT, but I did do well on some of the sections, especially the English portion. I just suck at testing and failed to complete it; I think I was out of meds that morning too, which sucked.
HaikerensGuide !0VegJ9Jl.Q (OP) replied with this 14 years ago, 1 minute later, 2 hours after the original post[^][v]#309,775
advi !!3gpAcg/hF replied with this 14 years ago, 4 minutes later, 2 hours after the original post[^][v]#309,778
@previous (HaikerensGuide !0VegJ9Jl.Q)
I struggled to finish some of the harder parts. I was so spaced out that I got a 17 on Reading, even though I did the essay part very well. :|
HaikerensGuide !0VegJ9Jl.Q (OP) replied with this 14 years ago, 1 minute later, 2 hours after the original post[^][v]#309,780
@previous (advi !!3gpAcg/hF)
I did everything well except for the literature/arts part and having to do a fucking speed essay. Which I almost didn't finish.