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Topic: It was only after pulling the knife across her throat...

Anonymous A started this discussion 14 years ago #17,265

that Jack noticed that what he originally thought was a star in the sky was getting larger. And closer....

Anonymous A (OP) double-posted this 14 years ago, 2 minutes later[^] [v] #292,057

"Not again" he thought as he finished his grisly task. This wasn't the first time the strangers had come calling. He knew that the voices would be next.

Anonymous B joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 1 minute later, 3 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #292,058

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Anonymous A (OP) replied with this 14 years ago, 3 seconds later, 3 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #292,059

They always come after a kill. Perhaps they know why he does it. Perhaps they're just curious. Perhaps I'm going insane.

henn joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 22 minutes later, 25 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #292,061

Jack comes to. He sprints to his ship. Just as he closes the hatch, the strange object in the sky lands. In his confused state, he manages to press the correct buttons to initiate launch.

Broseph !!fxnDb+Ve4 joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 3 minutes later, 29 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #292,062

@292,059 (A)
Perhaps this is the worst story ever written. Perhaps I won't stick around to find out. Perhaps you shouldn't write a story 1-2 sentences at a time. Perhaps you shouldn't write like a grade schooler.

Anonymous E joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 11 minutes later, 40 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #292,067

@previous (Broseph !!fxnDb+Ve4)
I challenge you to write a better short story.

henn replied with this 14 years ago, 2 minutes later, 43 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #292,069

Jack drifts in and out of conciousness. He plops down in the captians chair and fiddles with the buttons and switches on the ships dash. Even though Jack is incoherent, operating his frigate is almost instinctual.

(Edited 25 seconds later.)

Anonymous F joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 2 hours later, 3 hours after the original post[^] [v] #292,121

Our hero manages to lift off of the ground, and as his ship gains height he keeps struggling to stay awake. It keeps getting more difficult for Jack to keep his eyes open, and eventually he drifts off.

dw !AIy/L67q.s joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 1 minute later, 3 hours after the original post[^] [v] #292,123

Jack dies of malaria.

Anonymous H joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 16 minutes later, 3 hours after the original post[^] [v] #292,125

@previous (dw !AIy/L67q.s)
1. ENTER A MESSAGE FOR JACK'S TOMBSTONE
2. LOOK AROUND
3. CONTINUE ON THE TRAIL

henn replied with this 14 years ago, 16 minutes later, 4 hours after the original post[^] [v] #292,127

Luckily, Jack entered the right coordinates for Volton - Moon 5 right before he lost conciousness. The ship makes the deck suitable for hypersleep and is on route to it's destination.

(Edited 1 minute later.)

dw !AIy/L67q.s replied with this 14 years ago, 28 seconds later, 4 hours after the original post[^] [v] #292,128

@292,125 (H)
lol i was referencing far cry 2 but then i realized that doesnt have jack in it

henn replied with this 14 years ago, 16 minutes later, 4 hours after the original post[^] [v] #292,130

She was just a little girl. Someone had wished her dead but it wasn't any of Jack's business. It never is Jack's business, he's just in it for the paycheck.

(Edited 1 minute later.)

Anonymous B replied with this 14 years ago, 12 minutes later, 4 hours after the original post[^] [v] #292,132

Is Lynne back?
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