Topic: Read this thing I wrote
postmortem !!Qe8ScDbX+ started this discussion 14 years ago #17,082
stop motion life
shudder and shutter click
fluctuating in fantastic phantasmagoria
blurry phantom glass eyed stare
the red eye of the demon
kodak canon candid Boehm eye
white flash-click-over expose
the foundation of my life
a powder floating off your face
make-up to make-out we me made up
I made you up, my lucid dream
shadow games, eye shadow
rogue rouge
blush and I lied, eyeline
Mascara masquerade
My fair lady, the timeless affair
fairly vain, vanity fair
worn sole; spirited away
soundtrack from handless ambidextrian
pianoforte calliope machine
tuneless banging in perfect precision
we are all living in a diamond
we are living in a dream
this scene will be cut from the theatrical version
shudder and shutter click
fluctuating in fantastic phantasmagoria
blurry phantom glass eyed stare
the red eye of the demon
kodak canon candid Boehm eye
white flash-click-over expose
the foundation of my life
a powder floating off your face
make-up to make-out we me made up
I made you up, my lucid dream
shadow games, eye shadow
rogue rouge
blush and I lied, eyeline
Mascara masquerade
My fair lady, the timeless affair
fairly vain, vanity fair
worn sole; spirited away
soundtrack from handless ambidextrian
pianoforte calliope machine
tuneless banging in perfect precision
we are all living in a diamond
we are living in a dream
this scene will be cut from the theatrical version
voc joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 1 minute later[^] [v] #289,838
> expect postmortem
> get postmortem
> get postmortem
henn joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 6 minutes later, 7 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #289,844
I refuse to read it
Anonymous D joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 7 minutes later, 15 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #289,849
I liked this
Anonymous E joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 1 hour later, 2 hours after the original post[^] [v] #289,864
Oh my god... It's beautiful. A joy to read but also deeply insightful.
You've outdone yourself, OP.
You've outdone yourself, OP.
Ks !KansasxqvM joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 16 minutes later, 2 hours after the original post[^] [v] #289,869
Broseph !!fxnDb+Ve4 joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 3 hours later, 5 hours after the original post[^] [v] #289,918
tl;dr
And that means a lot coming from me. Your poem's boring as fuck.
And that means a lot coming from me. Your poem's boring as fuck.
Minichan joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 5 hours later, 11 hours after the original post[^] [v] #289,972
Broseph !!fxnDb+Ve4 replied with this 14 years ago, 13 hours later, 1 day after the original post[^] [v] #290,173
Anonymous I joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 18 hours later, 1 day after the original post[^] [v] #290,438
this is awesome, keep it up
shlief !hW6clEMVuQ joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 8 hours later, 2 days after the original post[^] [v] #290,539
bump!~