Topic: a deep poedm i wrote just now about how i feel

henn started this discussion 14 years ago #16,552

My heart
In a million pieces
All over the ground
Can't be put back together
Not even with super glue
Why?
Why must I feel this way?
Knife to my wrists

What'd you guys think?

squeegee !firstkPE1Q joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 37 seconds later[^] [v] #283,935

it's quite moving. who is it about?

Anonymous C joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 1 minute later, 1 minute after the original post[^] [v] #283,937

I was expecting a postmortem poem titled "I want to spam my dad".

henn (OP) replied with this 14 years ago, 1 minute later, 2 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #283,939

@283,935 (squeegee !firstkPE1Q)
It's about my recent breakup

Rainbow !DASHqGnDdc joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 1 second later, 2 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #283,940

Oh man I want some taco bell. Dunertime tomorrowwwwwwwwweeee :)

squeegee !firstkPE1Q replied with this 14 years ago, 2 minutes later, 5 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #283,941

@283,939 (henn)
you've still got becky, and what she's wearing :')

~ joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 2 seconds later, 5 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #283,942

@283,937 (C)

> I was expecting a postmortem poem titled "I want to spam my dad".

Anonymous F joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 1 minute later, 7 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #283,943

@OP
I cried for like 3 hours.

henn (OP) replied with this 14 years ago, 2 minutes later, 9 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #283,944

@283,941 (squeegee !firstkPE1Q)
No. She ignores and bans me in teh IRC. There is no hope for me and Becky anymore.

/wrists

squeegee !firstkPE1Q replied with this 14 years ago, 2 minutes later, 11 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #283,945

@previous (henn)
but... you're black, right? that doesn't make any sense.

Rainbow !DASHqGnDdc replied with this 14 years ago, 17 hours later, 17 hours after the original post[^] [v] #284,130

@283,940 (Rainbow !DASHqGnDdc)

I got the Burrito Supreme meal with nachos for Â£3.85 and an additional soft shell taco supreme for 99p. My drink was pepsi.

First taco I ever saw and also first taco I ever ate.

(Edited 4 minutes later.)

dw !AIy/L67q.s joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 21 minutes later, 18 hours after the original post[^] [v] #284,133

@previous (Rainbow !DASHqGnDdc)
and it's from a fast food restaurant :')

Rainbow !DASHqGnDdc replied with this 14 years ago, 16 minutes later, 18 hours after the original post[^] [v] #284,139

@previous (dw !AIy/L67q.s)

it was pretty nice to be honest

Anonymous H joined in and replied with this 14 years ago, 4 minutes later, 18 hours after the original post[^] [v] #284,142

@284,133 (dw !AIy/L67q.s)
whats wrong with that

fast food places make tasty food

Minichan