Topic: Narcissist (a poem written by me)
postmortem !!Qe8ScDbX+ started this discussion 15 years ago #15,694
I wake up in the morning, look in the mirror, and feel fine
I will say I feel grand, because I just am, great design
I'm designed to perfection, by a loving God, most loving to me
I am his best creation, look at a picture, look at me
I wrote this poem, so you would know, how much I love myself
so you would know, all of the reasons, you should love me yourself
all of the reasons, I'm charming, I'm handsome, I'm one of a kind
I am beautiful, I am so grand, not to mention my humble mind
I do hope you feel, inferior, as I'm superior
I am heavenly, inside and out, but don't fear my darling
Because I love, you yes true, I care about you so much
My undying fan, my flatterer, I so do want your touch
I need you to tell me, that I'm perfect, that I'm fine
I need you to say I'm grand, tell me I just am, great design
tell me I'm perfection, created by a loving God, be loving to me
tell me I'm his best creation, look at a picture, look at me
Because if you don't, my walls will come, crumbling down
I'll drown if you don't, in my sorrow, I'll leave town
Because In my mind, I'll go away, forever my dear
Because all I ever, did my dear, was tell a lie
I will say I feel grand, because I just am, great design
I'm designed to perfection, by a loving God, most loving to me
I am his best creation, look at a picture, look at me
I wrote this poem, so you would know, how much I love myself
so you would know, all of the reasons, you should love me yourself
all of the reasons, I'm charming, I'm handsome, I'm one of a kind
I am beautiful, I am so grand, not to mention my humble mind
I do hope you feel, inferior, as I'm superior
I am heavenly, inside and out, but don't fear my darling
Because I love, you yes true, I care about you so much
My undying fan, my flatterer, I so do want your touch
I need you to tell me, that I'm perfect, that I'm fine
I need you to say I'm grand, tell me I just am, great design
tell me I'm perfection, created by a loving God, be loving to me
tell me I'm his best creation, look at a picture, look at me
Because if you don't, my walls will come, crumbling down
I'll drown if you don't, in my sorrow, I'll leave town
Because In my mind, I'll go away, forever my dear
Because all I ever, did my dear, was tell a lie
(Edited 6 minutes later.)
Anonymous B joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 1 minute later[^] [v] #273,382
> I wake up in the morning
Seven a.m., waking up in the morning
Gotta be fresh, gotta go downstairs
Gotta have my bowl, gotta have cereal
Seein' everything, the time is goin'
Tickin' on and on, everybody's rushin'
Gotta get down to the bus stop
Gotta catch my bus, I see my friends
Seven a.m., waking up in the morning
Gotta be fresh, gotta go downstairs
Gotta have my bowl, gotta have cereal
Seein' everything, the time is goin'
Tickin' on and on, everybody's rushin'
Gotta get down to the bus stop
Gotta catch my bus, I see my friends
hamfist !0WA0VxNDIE joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 1 minute later, 3 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #273,384
/mc/ - shitty poetry open mic night
Anonymous D joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 1 minute later, 4 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #273,387
hamfist !0WA0VxNDIE replied with this 15 years ago, 2 minutes later, 7 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #273,390
Anonymous E joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 49 seconds later, 8 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #273,393
inb4 hamfist is a pretentious hipster
oh no, too late
oh no, too late
Falco !PZmcClOUDk joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 43 minutes later, 52 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #273,416
I hate myself.