Topic: My fanfic :D

green started this discussion 15 years ago #12,783

Riker touching his bum and licking Picard's 13 inch penis. Data walking in and says, 'you'll rike this'. He taking all his clothes of and gets out his 30 inch android dick. 'It is fully automated for the captain's pleasure'. 'Put it in before Worf comes'. Data put it in Picard. 'Harder Data. That's an order! I'M CUMMING!'. Geordi walked in and Picard came all over his visor. The end.

Anonymous B joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 2 minutes later[^] [v] #230,043

You scare me a little.

Anonymous C joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 4 minutes later, 6 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #230,045

rofl at picard 13 inch cock

green (OP) replied with this 15 years ago, 7 minutes later, 13 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #230,048

Warp 10 up Worf's wormhole.
'I am a Klingon warrior!' Worf screamed as Geordi thrusted in and out of his bum. 'I feel no pain'. Geordi was pounding into Worf with his 15 inch photon torpedo. 'Computer' shouted Geordi in ecstasy, 'activate the Emergency Medical Ho!' 'please state the nature of your medical emergency' said the doctor, winking. 'Worf needs to suck cock'. Worf started to suck the doctor's cock and he started trembling..

SQUARED :3 !L.....AlN. joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 5 minutes later, 19 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #230,050

@230,043 (B)

> You scare me a little.

Anonymous E joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 1 minute later, 20 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #230,051

@OP
I really feel you have overlooked the older man/young boy themes that could be used by including a Picard/Wesley Crusher scene in your work. Also, Data's programming should cause him to struggle with being objectified as a sex toy, leading him to question the role of hedonism in forming human relationships -- a struggle that should only be quelled by one of Picard's rousing speeches about selflessness and the the give and take necessary in human friendship. I'm sorry Green, but if you really want to break into the big-time gay ST:TNG fanfic scene, you will have to show more nuanced relationships between your characters.

green (OP) replied with this 15 years ago, 6 minutes later, 27 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #230,052

@230,048 (green)

'What the devil is going on!' yelled Picard. He walked in screwing Riker. 'If you were planning an orgy, you should have invited me!' The doctor went up to Picard and put his 50 inch cock up his anus. 'Oh god. Raise shields, I'M CUMMING!' Picard came so hard Riker puked out cum. 'Lick it up Worf! That's an order'.

cccuuunnttt !nIGga.SL0w replied with this 15 years ago, 43 seconds later, 27 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #230,053

FYI this isn't really green.

Killer Lettuce !!iNo3FkiZx replied with this 15 years ago, 5 minutes later, 33 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #230,058

@previous (cccuuunnttt !nIGga.SL0w)
Oh, that's good.

I'm happy to see that your name is an expletive again, by the way. :3

green (OP) replied with this 15 years ago, 2 minutes later, 35 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #230,059

Ferus !ffFezFerus joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 23 minutes later, 59 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #230,070

op is a faggot

Anonymous G joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 1 minute later, 1 hour after the original post[^] [v] #230,072

Ferus !ffFezFerus replied with this 15 years ago, 1 minute later, 1 hour after the original post[^] [v] #230,074

@previous (G)

Hi stal

Anonymous G replied with this 15 years ago, 52 seconds later, 1 hour after the original post[^] [v] #230,075

@previous (Ferus !ffFezFerus)
I have no idea who you're talking about.

Anonymous H joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 1 minute later, 1 hour after the original post[^] [v] #230,077

@230,059 (green)
> lovechild of Matt and Falco
oh god no

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