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Topic: I'm writing an erotica, tell me what you think so far.

Anonymous A started this discussion 15 years ago #11,596

Highschool was a funny time for me, funny in a lot of different ways. I remember it started in 9th grade, early on enough I suppose. I was tapping my pencil in Algebra, I know I should've been studying. But algebra is soooo boring. We were learning about equations or
some bullshit, whatever. Fucking...Whatever. Anyway, I was thinking about the boy next to me, he's so handsome. His name is Corey, the most handsome boy in school. Corey Anderson, I'll never forget that boy. What he did to me, what I dreamed he would do to me.

I would imagine him sticking his big hard dick up my virgin ass, pumping in and out of my sweet little poop-shoot until he would just come all over my back. That's what my thoughts were like in algebra class, I think you'll agree that's much more interesting than algebra.

I think I may have forgotten to introduce myself, my apologies. My name is Jackson Iyer, I am a good enough looking boy, I have a 7 inch penis, that's about average I think. I actually wish it was smaller, or non-existent actually. I've always identified with the female gender more than my own. When I was fourteen I didn't know what to do about that of course I suppose I just acted very feminine. I've just always like the idea of being penetrated much more than the idea of penetrating someone. Ever since I was twelve years old I would experiment with items in my fridge for masturbation purposes. I would avoid the salads at dinner time, I knew exactly where the cucumbers had been.

I was rather embarrassed during algebra, because well thinking about Corey gave me such an erection. I wore gym shorts that day, so my dick was clearly visible through my shorts. My face went flush as I looked down at my desk. I obviously couldn't raise my hand and say "Mr. Jones, may I go to the restroom?", because if I stood up everyone in the class, Shiela, and Connor, and Eric and the rest they would all see that I had an erection, that I could get an erection. I hated being reminded that I was a boy.

So I just tapped my pencil, and waited it out trying paying attention to the math problems, but all I could think about was that wonderful cock of corey's pumping my tight asshole. Finally giving into my own primal instincts I reached a hand in my shorts and directed my penis down towards my leg. I started rubbing slowly at first to make sure no one was watching, then I just went for it and strangled my cock with my hand, trying to masturbate as quickly as I could.

Everything in the background became meaningless to me, it was just me and my dick. I didn't care about algebra, or about the way I looked, or about my gender issues, I just wanted to come, I needed to come. I thought about Corey, with his dark hair and bright green eyes. His toned body, on top of me, in my dreams, he said that he loved me and that's what made me come. At least in my mind me and Corey could always be together. On a Queen sized bed, white with pink silk blankets and sheets. My face on a pillow as I imagined him all the way on top of me, his hard cock in my ass.

And as he came in my dream, I came myself, in the real world. My ejaculate messing up the floor of the classroom, the floor was carpet and so I just rubbed it in with my foot, and once my erection subsided I asked to go the restroom.

I walked dreamily out of the classroom, once given permission to go of course. I played with my hair as if I were a girl,I skipped and twirled. In my mind I wasn't a boy, for a moment, with no one watching, I could be a Rachel, or a Sarah, or a Madonna. With everyone in their respective classes the white floors and walls, and the black ceiling were all mine.

And when I came across the bathroom door, it doesn't take a genius to figure out which door I went in. Feeling a rush of excitement, I pushed open the door marked for girls making my way to one of the stalls. I pushed the door open, and then sat down on the toilet. Feeling the cold porcelain on my bare ass gave me a bit of a jolt. I tucked my dick under my legs in order to urinate, I urinated in spurts. Remaining precum and piss. I made sure to look away, so I couldn't see my penis.

After I finished I wiped up with the toilet paper hanging from the wall next to the toilet, afterwhich I put on my blue underwear. My mom wouldn't let me get thongs, but I still wore tighty whities. Except, well they were blue obviously. And then I zipped up my pants, skinny jeans of course. Let myself out of the stall, and made my way to the sink in order to wash my hands. Running hot water over my hands, I thought about what I had done. I wondered if anyone noticed, I mean if I saw that sort of thing I certainly wouldn't say anything.

The walk back to glass was the gallow's walk because of that, surely somebody saw what I was doing. I mean, but we all have to get release sometimes right? I'm sure they would understand.


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Anonymous B joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 10 minutes later[^] [v] #208,770

http://boards.4chan.org/x/res/8590306

Anonymous C joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 39 minutes later, 49 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #208,809

It needs moar fog.

Fake anon !ZkUt8arUCU joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 2 minutes later, 51 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #208,814

@previous (C)
This

Falco !PZmcClOUDk joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 1 minute later, 53 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #208,819

@208,770 (B)

> http://boards.4chan.org/x/res/8590306

for those who don't feel like clicking the link, and when the link expires, it's the same story.

Anonymous F joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 1 minute later, 54 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #208,821

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@208,819 (Falco !PZmcClOUDk)
Thanks for breaking that down for us.

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