Topic: New song: Take Me Out
Falco !PZmcClOUDk started this discussion 15 years ago #11,509
http://soundcloud.com/vectron/take-me-out
Just finished this.
Take. Me. Out.
Bring. Me. Home.
Just finished this.
Take. Me. Out.
Bring. Me. Home.
Voice of !WisdomHsuU joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 1 minute later[^] [v] #207,250
Take. Me. Out.
To. The. Ball. Game.
To. The. Ball. Game.
Anonymous C joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 2 minutes later, 3 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #207,254
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Anonymous C double-posted this 15 years ago, 40 seconds later, 4 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #207,256
oh fuck it
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Falco !PZmcClOUDk (OP) replied with this 15 years ago, 1 minute later, 5 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #207,257
Anonymous D joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 14 seconds later, 5 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #207,258
You're getting better at your craft for sure, Falco.
Falco !PZmcClOUDk (OP) replied with this 15 years ago, 7 minutes later, 13 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #207,267
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Anonymous D replied with this 15 years ago, 5 minutes later, 37 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #207,278
Just as constructive criticism, I don't like the abrupt ending. The main hook of the song feels like it should be building towards something but it never happens. Play around with it a little bit. The Daft Punk sample worked in really well, but I was hoping for a better bridge. Overall it's really good though, a lot better than some of your older stuff.
ltamake !!onnLC5KY8 joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 6 minutes later, 44 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #207,279
I SAY DON'T YOU KNOW
YOU SAY YOU DON'T KNOW
I SAY... TAKE ME OUT
YOU SAY YOU DON'T KNOW
I SAY... TAKE ME OUT