Topic: i just found out this guy with asperger's who i went to high school with writes fanfiction
Anonymous A started this discussion 15 years ago #10,993
...about sonic and pokemon
here is one
These stories will follow every day of each chapter for the 12 days of Christmas starting December 13th all the way until the special day itself December 25th
We begin our tales of adventure and bliss with a speedy hedgehog. Actually make that 2 since these two lovebirds have been at it since they met in middle school although the boy has finally slowed down. A Christmas miracle may be happening or expecting in this case because the women is already eight months into. With the frosty blizzard coming in can Sonic be a hero not only to others but to his new family member as well?
Story 1: The Christmas Miracle
"Sonic this baby really wants to come out you know. It has been like eight months since we received news." Amy said
"Yeah it has it is almost here now. I just wonder what we are going to name it though hun." Sonic said
"Anyway it is getting late so I will hit the hay and you should too. It is almost 10:00 in the evening."
"I might as well too. No sense of staying up all night on patrol again. I'll get Tails to do that."
"But doesn't he already have plans with Cream or with you again?"
"I don't care I have a family that needs to be taken care of. Surely that genius can understand that."
"Good Night Sonic."
"Good Night Amy."
I looked toward the night sky and saw a little shine of the stars. We usually don't get a view like this in Station Square but I guess you can expect the unexpected and… whoa what was that I wondered and it was Amy screaming
"Ames don't tell me it is time already! Oh great hold on Ames I will get you to the Station Square hospital follow me!" Sonic exclaimed
I could tell that she was in a lot of pain at this point so I started the car and immediately called the Station Square Emergency Hotline and I told them the situation. They sent out a stretcher as soon as we got to the hospital and they took her for immediate care. I was in the waiting room and for the first time in a while I actually felt the adrenaline pumping through me not because of excitement but more of anxiety. I wondered if she would actually make it through because she wasn't due for another month but what the heck do I know. All I am glad for is that thank god I wasn't born a woman because well… never mind you get the picture. I then saw the doctor come out and he told me that it is going good but she has a lack of oxygen to be able to hold on so he asked me if he could put her in an oxygen tank or whatever it is they use to support oxygen and I was like what the hell are you waiting for get her the help she needs you don't need my damn consent. For a while now I was actually in control of my anger but now with all this planned parenthood it just came out and I don't know why. I apologized for my rude behavior and the doc said it was no problem because he knows the pressure of becoming a father as well. I waited for like two hours until suddenly I saw the lights all around the hospital go off. I then heard and emergency warning to send all backup power to the emergency room and let me tell you I was bouncing off of walls to hear that. I had to check up on what they were doing and if my beloved would actually deliver our future generation. The doctor's told me that she is doing all right and I was glad to hear that so I waited in the room anxiously awaiting the final decision and after 3 hours of waiting the doctor came in with a puzzled look on his face. He told me to come inside and see what happened with my beloved Amy and then at that moment I saw her cuddling our beloved baby girl. I had a big sigh of relief and this was actually a joyous occasion for me. I took a picture of the baby girl and sent it all my friends to share the good news.
"So Sonic since I had a rough time delivering this one you try to think of a name and I will see if we both can agree on it."
"I've already got one: Miracle because she came out a miraculous baby."
"Miracle the Hedgehog I love it."
"And I love you too Amy."
And so with another person to care for Sonic not only helped others like his duty spells it out but also raises and cares for the baby Miracle. She has her mother's strength and her father's speed and is already crawling. Until Next Time this is ShadicOzzy see you next chapter
here is one
These stories will follow every day of each chapter for the 12 days of Christmas starting December 13th all the way until the special day itself December 25th
We begin our tales of adventure and bliss with a speedy hedgehog. Actually make that 2 since these two lovebirds have been at it since they met in middle school although the boy has finally slowed down. A Christmas miracle may be happening or expecting in this case because the women is already eight months into. With the frosty blizzard coming in can Sonic be a hero not only to others but to his new family member as well?
Story 1: The Christmas Miracle
"Sonic this baby really wants to come out you know. It has been like eight months since we received news." Amy said
"Yeah it has it is almost here now. I just wonder what we are going to name it though hun." Sonic said
"Anyway it is getting late so I will hit the hay and you should too. It is almost 10:00 in the evening."
"I might as well too. No sense of staying up all night on patrol again. I'll get Tails to do that."
"But doesn't he already have plans with Cream or with you again?"
"I don't care I have a family that needs to be taken care of. Surely that genius can understand that."
"Good Night Sonic."
"Good Night Amy."
I looked toward the night sky and saw a little shine of the stars. We usually don't get a view like this in Station Square but I guess you can expect the unexpected and… whoa what was that I wondered and it was Amy screaming
"Ames don't tell me it is time already! Oh great hold on Ames I will get you to the Station Square hospital follow me!" Sonic exclaimed
I could tell that she was in a lot of pain at this point so I started the car and immediately called the Station Square Emergency Hotline and I told them the situation. They sent out a stretcher as soon as we got to the hospital and they took her for immediate care. I was in the waiting room and for the first time in a while I actually felt the adrenaline pumping through me not because of excitement but more of anxiety. I wondered if she would actually make it through because she wasn't due for another month but what the heck do I know. All I am glad for is that thank god I wasn't born a woman because well… never mind you get the picture. I then saw the doctor come out and he told me that it is going good but she has a lack of oxygen to be able to hold on so he asked me if he could put her in an oxygen tank or whatever it is they use to support oxygen and I was like what the hell are you waiting for get her the help she needs you don't need my damn consent. For a while now I was actually in control of my anger but now with all this planned parenthood it just came out and I don't know why. I apologized for my rude behavior and the doc said it was no problem because he knows the pressure of becoming a father as well. I waited for like two hours until suddenly I saw the lights all around the hospital go off. I then heard and emergency warning to send all backup power to the emergency room and let me tell you I was bouncing off of walls to hear that. I had to check up on what they were doing and if my beloved would actually deliver our future generation. The doctor's told me that she is doing all right and I was glad to hear that so I waited in the room anxiously awaiting the final decision and after 3 hours of waiting the doctor came in with a puzzled look on his face. He told me to come inside and see what happened with my beloved Amy and then at that moment I saw her cuddling our beloved baby girl. I had a big sigh of relief and this was actually a joyous occasion for me. I took a picture of the baby girl and sent it all my friends to share the good news.
"So Sonic since I had a rough time delivering this one you try to think of a name and I will see if we both can agree on it."
"I've already got one: Miracle because she came out a miraculous baby."
"Miracle the Hedgehog I love it."
"And I love you too Amy."
And so with another person to care for Sonic not only helped others like his duty spells it out but also raises and cares for the baby Miracle. She has her mother's strength and her father's speed and is already crawling. Until Next Time this is ShadicOzzy see you next chapter
Anonymous A (OP) double-posted this 15 years ago, 2 minutes later[^] [v] #196,597
"It has been six months since we have been aboard the S.S. Unova making our escape from the evil Team Plasma Galactic Rocket. We barely made it out alive and thus nearly sacrificed our fuckin lives for this. This is my story and this is how where I started to where I am today"
from the hard times of a winged raichu
from the hard times of a winged raichu
The Pony !.PonyTzEbE joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 1 minute later, 4 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #196,598
I read the first line and stopped. That was terrible.
hurr joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 2 minutes later, 7 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #196,602
fanfics never fails to make me ಠ_ಠand this one is no differentLatestDude !fdNXKPsJjE joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 10 minutes later, 17 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #196,609
It's people like this that give fanfiction a bad name. :( I love reading and writing it, and a ton of it is actually quite good. There's just... a lot of shit to wade through.
The Pony !.PonyTzEbE replied with this 15 years ago, 10 minutes later, 27 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #196,613
@previous (LatestDude !fdNXKPsJjE)
> I love...writing it
Do you have a FF.net account?
Also, Sturgeon's Revelation is in full effect with regards to fanfic.
> I love...writing it
Do you have a FF.net account?
Also, Sturgeon's Revelation is in full effect with regards to fanfic.
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LatestDude !fdNXKPsJjE replied with this 15 years ago, 6 minutes later, 33 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #196,617
@previous (The Pony !.PonyTzEbE)
I do, but it simultaneously doesn't house anything yet (I like writing it, but I'm too scared to publish anything) and is tied to my general online identity, which I don't care to inform Minichan at large of.
I do, but it simultaneously doesn't house anything yet (I like writing it, but I'm too scared to publish anything) and is tied to my general online identity, which I don't care to inform Minichan at large of.
The Pony !.PonyTzEbE replied with this 15 years ago, 1 minute later, 35 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #196,618
@previous (LatestDude !fdNXKPsJjE)
Oh. Could you email it to me in private so I can sub you?
[email protected]
Oh. Could you email it to me in private so I can sub you?
[email protected]
LatestDude !fdNXKPsJjE replied with this 15 years ago, 5 minutes later, 41 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #196,620
The Pony !.PonyTzEbE replied with this 15 years ago, 18 minutes later, 59 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #196,626
@previous (LatestDude !fdNXKPsJjE)
I actually registered it before Past Sins, you know. Both my email and the character are named after the same thing - the primordial Greek goddess of the night, mother to the gods of Sleep and Death.
I actually registered it before Past Sins, you know. Both my email and the character are named after the same thing - the primordial Greek goddess of the night, mother to the gods of Sleep and Death.
LatestDude !fdNXKPsJjE replied with this 15 years ago, 52 seconds later, 1 hour after the original post[^] [v] #196,627
@previous (The Pony !.PonyTzEbE)
I was referring to the "derpymail.org" part, but that is interesting as well. :D
I was referring to the "derpymail.org" part, but that is interesting as well. :D
Triptych !LightPenis joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 54 seconds later, 1 hour after the original post[^] [v] #196,628
LatestDude !fdNXKPsJjE replied with this 15 years ago, 1 minute later, 1 hour after the original post[^] [v] #196,629
@previous (Triptych !LightPenis)
I'm more sensitive than most people probably expect. Harsh criticism can hurt. Granted, the FFdN community's standards are so low I could probably submit random spam mail I get as a story and get twenty positive reviews overnight, but... I don't know. There's always that nagging fear in the back of my head.
I'm more sensitive than most people probably expect. Harsh criticism can hurt. Granted, the FFdN community's standards are so low I could probably submit random spam mail I get as a story and get twenty positive reviews overnight, but... I don't know. There's always that nagging fear in the back of my head.
Triptych !LightPenis replied with this 15 years ago, 4 minutes later, 1 hour after the original post[^] [v] #196,630
@previous (LatestDude !fdNXKPsJjE)
Ah, thought so. Do you take criticisms to heart IRL, too?
Also, if shittily written and clicheed fanfictions get popular on FF, chances are that a well-written and original one will gather a small following at most.
Ah, thought so. Do you take criticisms to heart IRL, too?
Also, if shittily written and clicheed fanfictions get popular on FF, chances are that a well-written and original one will gather a small following at most.
The Pony !.PonyTzEbE replied with this 15 years ago, 1 minute later, 1 hour after the original post[^] [v] #196,631
@196,629 (LatestDude !fdNXKPsJjE)
I've found that with FF.net people either want to leave a positive review, point out some plot hole or another or give actual constructive criticism. The only time I've seen negative reviews are on ones like "Jesus & Hitler: A Romance", since they're offending people.
I've found that with FF.net people either want to leave a positive review, point out some plot hole or another or give actual constructive criticism. The only time I've seen negative reviews are on ones like "Jesus & Hitler: A Romance", since they're offending people.
Fake anon !ZkUt8arUCU joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 5 minutes later, 1 hour after the original post[^] [v] #196,633
@previous (The Pony !.PonyTzEbE)
> "Jesus & Hitler: A Romance"
Holy fuck, I just started reading. Absolutely fucking brilliant.
> "Jesus & Hitler: A Romance"
Holy fuck, I just started reading. Absolutely fucking brilliant.
LatestDude !fdNXKPsJjE replied with this 15 years ago, 2 minutes later, 1 hour after the original post[^] [v] #196,635
@196,630 (Triptych !LightPenis)
> Do you take criticisms to heart IRL, too?
Indeed. 'Tis not fun. :(
> chances are that a well-written and original one will gather a small following at most.
I've actually seen many well-written, huge fanfics get major followings on the site; even outside of it, on places such as TV Tropes. FFdN just has a... very... odd scale of quality.
@196,631 (The Pony !.PonyTzEbE)
I know. I never said it was rational. :P
> Do you take criticisms to heart IRL, too?
Indeed. 'Tis not fun. :(
> chances are that a well-written and original one will gather a small following at most.
I've actually seen many well-written, huge fanfics get major followings on the site; even outside of it, on places such as TV Tropes. FFdN just has a... very... odd scale of quality.
@196,631 (The Pony !.PonyTzEbE)
I know. I never said it was rational. :P
Triptych !LightPenis replied with this 15 years ago, 7 minutes later, 1 hour after the original post[^] [v] #196,636
@previous (LatestDude !fdNXKPsJjE)
D'aw. <3
Hah, really? Sounds interesting, actually. And that's not so odd if you think about it. Same way Twilight is popular as fuck and so is... I dunno, House of Leaves.
D'aw. <3
Hah, really? Sounds interesting, actually. And that's not so odd if you think about it. Same way Twilight is popular as fuck and so is... I dunno, House of Leaves.
The Pony !.PonyTzEbE replied with this 15 years ago, 29 minutes later, 1 hour after the original post[^] [v] #196,648
@196,633 (Fake anon !ZkUt8arUCU)
I found the irony in the reviews hilarious. For example:
> You make me sick! This probably the most offensive and twisted crap I've ever seen! And to post in the bible fanfic section where naturally probably a lot of the viewers are Christian! What kind of screwed up person are you to write total crap like this!
> Why did you write this? its not funny, and its extremly offensive. Not only did you potray the son of God as a faggot you paired him with argueably the most hated man in history. Honestly, Why? You clearly arent a Christian so why waste your time writing this? Seriously this is such a revolting concept. Whats wrong with you?
I found the irony in the reviews hilarious. For example:
> You make me sick! This probably the most offensive and twisted crap I've ever seen! And to post in the bible fanfic section where naturally probably a lot of the viewers are Christian! What kind of screwed up person are you to write total crap like this!
> Why did you write this? its not funny, and its extremly offensive. Not only did you potray the son of God as a faggot you paired him with argueably the most hated man in history. Honestly, Why? You clearly arent a Christian so why waste your time writing this? Seriously this is such a revolting concept. Whats wrong with you?
Anonymous G joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 5 minutes later, 1 hour after the original post[^] [v] #196,653
@previous (The Pony !.PonyTzEbE)
oh shit, now I gotta read the whole OP.
Nevermind. I was let down. I read the whole thread, and now I have some googling to do.
oh shit, now I gotta read the whole OP.
Nevermind. I was let down. I read the whole thread, and now I have some googling to do.
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The Pony !.PonyTzEbE replied with this 15 years ago, 1 minute later, 2 hours after the original post[^] [v] #196,655
The Pony !.PonyTzEbE double-posted this 15 years ago, 37 seconds later, 2 hours after the original post[^] [v] #196,656
Jesus & Hitler: A Romance chapter 2 is even better, by the way. Jesus and Hitler have an orgy with God and I think maybe Satan as well.
(Edited 29 seconds later.)
Anonymous G replied with this 15 years ago, 47 seconds later, 2 hours after the original post[^] [v] #196,657
The Pony !.PonyTzEbE replied with this 15 years ago, 1 minute later, 2 hours after the original post[^] [v] #196,658
@previous (G)
Hahahahahhaha I just read the OP and died laughing when I read this:
> "So Sonic since I had a rough time delivering this one you try to think of a name and I will see if we both can agree on it."
> "I've already got one"
Hahahahahhaha I just read the OP and died laughing when I read this:
> "So Sonic since I had a rough time delivering this one you try to think of a name and I will see if we both can agree on it."
> "I've already got one"
Anonymous G replied with this 15 years ago, 2 minutes later, 2 hours after the original post[^] [v] #196,659
The Pony !.PonyTzEbE replied with this 15 years ago, 2 minutes later, 2 hours after the original post[^] [v] #196,660
@previous (G)
It's more the asshole behaviour of Sonic. "Fuck off Amy, thinking that you have to agree what the babby is called. This is her name, deal with it."
It's more the asshole behaviour of Sonic. "Fuck off Amy, thinking that you have to agree what the babby is called. This is her name, deal with it."
Anonymous G replied with this 15 years ago, 9 minutes later, 2 hours after the original post[^] [v] #196,664
@previous (The Pony !.PonyTzEbE)
MC should write a community fan fiction. Something along the lines of a cross between MLP and trolls, and CWC.
Now hear me out. Instead of ponies, they are trolls. And Sonichu is the bad guy. He always comes to troll-ville and fucks things up, and so the trolls have to fight him and all the homosexual hedgehog.
Either that, or a blatant rip of of the whole sonichu thing but with a red hedgehog instead of yellow. Either way, we send it to CWC and tell him it's being made into a movie.
MC should write a community fan fiction. Something along the lines of a cross between MLP and trolls, and CWC.
Now hear me out. Instead of ponies, they are trolls. And Sonichu is the bad guy. He always comes to troll-ville and fucks things up, and so the trolls have to fight him and all the homosexual hedgehog.
Either that, or a blatant rip of of the whole sonichu thing but with a red hedgehog instead of yellow. Either way, we send it to CWC and tell him it's being made into a movie.
The Pony !.PonyTzEbE replied with this 15 years ago, 7 minutes later, 2 hours after the original post[^] [v] #196,665
@previous (G)
> Now hear me out. Instead of ponies, they are trolls.
So really it's like nothing to do with MLP at all then.
> Now hear me out. Instead of ponies, they are trolls.
So really it's like nothing to do with MLP at all then.
Anonymous G replied with this 15 years ago, 2 minutes later, 2 hours after the original post[^] [v] #196,666
@previous (The Pony !.PonyTzEbE)
well, troll-ville. And the names I guess. Like, um... Rainbow troll. You know, really obvious and stupid shit. and they have ugly marks or something.
Y'all are the pony experts.
well, troll-ville. And the names I guess. Like, um... Rainbow troll. You know, really obvious and stupid shit. and they have ugly marks or something.
Y'all are the pony experts.
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The Pony !.PonyTzEbE replied with this 15 years ago, 51 minutes later, 3 hours after the original post[^] [v] #196,674
@previous (G)
It just seems kind of forced and gay. Why do we have to have Rainbow Troll instead of a normal troll.
It just seems kind of forced and gay. Why do we have to have Rainbow Troll instead of a normal troll.
dreamworks !AUIkTW/L46 joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 2 hours later, 5 hours after the original post[^] [v] #196,685
@196,626 (The Pony !.PonyTzEbE)
I played a game in which you are Nyx and another god I forgot the name of.
I played a game in which you are Nyx and another god I forgot the name of.
Anonymous C replied with this 15 years ago, 1 hour later, 7 hours after the original post[^] [v] #196,694
@196,629 (LatestDude !fdNXKPsJjE)
huh, i woulda thought an anontalk regular would have a fairly thick skin
huh, i woulda thought an anontalk regular would have a fairly thick skin
Anonymous I joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 3 hours later, 10 hours after the original post[^] [v] #196,705
@196,674 (The Pony !.PonyTzEbE)
> It just seems kind of forced and gay.
I would imagine Chris-chan's reaction to "My Little Trolls: Zap to the Extreme" crossover fan-fiction would be slightly less reserved than your normal casual observation.
@196,674 (The Pony !.PonyTzEbE)
> Why do we have to have Rainbow Troll instead of a normal troll.
because then it wouldn't be a shitty MLP, CWC fanfic based on trolls. We combine his two favorite things with his worst enemies --and make his prize creation into an evil bad guy.
Edit: You know, after reading this I've decided this sounds like a lot of work.
> It just seems kind of forced and gay.
I would imagine Chris-chan's reaction to "My Little Trolls: Zap to the Extreme" crossover fan-fiction would be slightly less reserved than your normal casual observation.
@196,674 (The Pony !.PonyTzEbE)
> Why do we have to have Rainbow Troll instead of a normal troll.
because then it wouldn't be a shitty MLP, CWC fanfic based on trolls. We combine his two favorite things with his worst enemies --and make his prize creation into an evil bad guy.
Edit: You know, after reading this I've decided this sounds like a lot of work.
(Edited 38 seconds later.)
Anonymous J joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 10 minutes later, 10 hours after the original post[^] [v] #196,706
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA