Minichan

Topic: rate my poem

Anonymous A started this discussion 15 years ago #10,256

i don't give a fuck
it's a dick you're gonna suck
what dick
my dick

take a lick
it's gonna be sick
you're gonna get sick
when you choke on my dick

throw up on my legs
I do this shit only because of your begs

you can be my teenage dream
I can be your wet dream
wet with blood and tears
as I tear the flesh from the bone

My dick is hard
you're my wild card
I'm gonna plunge it into your ass
I hope that isn't too crass

take a gun
shoot you in the mouth until I'm done
I'm gonna kill your parents and rape your dog
put them in a swamp, a bog

soggy flesh on wet solid metal
I am the remaining flower petal
of a garden run dry

suck my dick

Anonymous B joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 2 minutes later[^] [v] #182,410

Was anybody else expecting Sprite to be mentioned after the first line?

Anonymous C joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 38 minutes later, 40 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #182,427

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Anonymous D joined in and replied with this 15 years ago, 14 minutes later, 54 minutes after the original post[^] [v] #182,433

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